Today is an acrostic.
Jennifer
Just a faded note, a whisper
Echoing through the dark,
Narrow corridors of her past.
Now is a symphony. Her future
Is a cacophony of waltzes,
Fugues, and sonatas. If he
Exists for her, it’s as a muted
Requiem, and nothing
more.
This sounds like love lost and t is very sad and eloquent
ReplyDeletePretty much.
DeleteI don't know if I like it or not. It seems too simple.
I am not expert, but I do believe that some feelings/ideas are best expressed in a simply stated kind of manner. Perhaps this is one of those feelings.
ReplyDeleteyou're a really good poet, dude. i've got no issue with simple. in fact, i prefer it. i can't stand pompous poetry, where the sentiment gets lost in all the tools and tricks of the trade. this is good, e. i like it.
ReplyDeleteyou're a really good poet, dude. i've got no issue with simple. in fact, i prefer it. i can't stand pompous poetry, where the sentiment gets lost in all the tools and tricks of the trade. this is good, e. i like it.
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